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« on: May 29, 2007, 07:55:27 PM » |
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Well here ppl will post poetry to show chris is not the only creative person on here
(no offence)
Ill post some later
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Saint
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« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2007, 07:22:34 AM » |
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Hmmm.very creative. I'd say by you talking about the four horsemen, it could possibly mean the apocalypse. As you say 'Take me', I'm guessing tht you have died, and they hav come to take you away.
"Is this my fate?
It is surely.
We all run and shout,
Take me in leave them out."
This makes me wonder if there are other people around you who are getting hurt. Maybe the narrator is trying to say that only he deserves to be hurt? This poem is full of subtext...
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Charlie
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« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2007, 09:51:49 AM » |
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Like all my haiku,
This one was written for kicks,
And has no merit.
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Ninja
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« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2007, 02:21:38 PM » |
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Um.. im not good at poetry so ill just do what has to be done, (though many will hate me for it  ) "I'm a poet, And I didn't know it." Please dont kill me  |
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« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2007, 03:32:11 PM » |
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Are we alowed to post our favorite poems? Or only ones we've written?
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« Reply #5 on: May 30, 2007, 07:04:00 PM » |
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Are we alowed to post our favorite poems? Or only ones we've written?
Go ahead and post your favorite but dont say its yours |
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« Reply #6 on: May 30, 2007, 07:40:19 PM » |
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He thought it was the largest puddle
He'd go splashing through
Turns out it was the smallest lake-
And the deepest too.
-Shell Silverstein...
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« Reply #7 on: May 30, 2007, 07:42:00 PM » |
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He thought it was the largest puddle
He'd go splashing through
Turns out it was the smallest lake-
And the deepest too.
-Shell Silverstein...
I like that |
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« Reply #8 on: May 30, 2007, 07:54:51 PM » |
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He thought it was the largest puddle
He'd go splashing through
Turns out it was the smallest lake-
And the deepest too.
-Shell Silverstein...
Ahhh good old Shel... |
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« Reply #9 on: May 30, 2007, 08:29:43 PM » |
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He thought it was the largest puddle
He'd go splashing through
Turns out it was the smallest lake-
And the deepest too.
-Shell Silverstein...
Ahhh good old Shel... I have read some of his stuff |
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« Reply #10 on: May 30, 2007, 10:39:19 PM » |
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i have some of my own:
Darkness:
Darkness is war, Darkness is peace.
Darkness indiffers, our lives it doth cease.
It murders our souls, it ruins our feast.
Darkness is destruction, for it is our beast.
The Poem of the Demi-God
When the time comes, I'll be omniscient.
The mortals all figure I'm just a peasant.
little do they know as i bide and I bide...
They better serve me well or their asses I'll fry.
Their steel chariots will crumple in my ravenous wrath.
The people all will die, and their houses I'll sack.
I'll kill without mercy, second thoughts I have None.
Only when I have satisfied my lust for death will I be done.
both made by me: Daniel Lloyd-Miller
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« Reply #11 on: May 31, 2007, 12:41:59 AM » |
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i have some of my own:
Darkness:
...Darkness indiffers, our lives it doth cease.
It murders our souls, it ruins our feast....
I reckon that's what garden torches are for... |
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« Reply #12 on: May 31, 2007, 03:12:15 AM » |
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That puddle one is good, though I'm pretty sure there are deeper oceans.
Anyway:
Here upon the twilight shore,
Sings an angel nevermore,
Sending us her glorious grace,
For the ever lasting race.
Upon this shore a knight once stood,
Who listened to this angels voice,
He fell in love at the first sight,
and now his blades are bathed in blood.
For this angel had a quest,
To see if we are worthy of the test,
To see if we can stand the torture,
Of the world that they detest.
Never seeking answers,
always asking questions,
surely we can never last,
If we are to remain this way.
The day is ending, the night is nigh,
And people lie there wondering why,
The world has changed and answers found,
And to the heavens we are now bound.
Here upon the twilight shore,
Sings an angel nevermore,
Sending us her glorious grace,
For the ever lasting race.
Yes that is my own work, hope you enjoy it!
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« Reply #13 on: May 31, 2007, 10:04:17 AM » |
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That puddle one is good, though I'm pretty sure there are deeper oceans.
Anyway:
Here upon the twilight shore,
Sings an angel nevermore,
Sending us her glorious grace,
For the ever lasting race.
Upon this shore a knight once stood,
Who listened to this angels voice,
He fell in love at the first sight,
and now his blades are bathed in blood.
For this angel had a quest,
To see if we are worthy of the test,
To see if we can stand the torture,
Of the world that they detest.
Never seeking answers,
always asking questions,
surely we can never last,
If we are to remain this way.
The day is ending, the night is nigh,
And people lie there wondering why,
The world has changed and answers found,
And to the heavens we are now bound.
Here upon the twilight shore,
Sings an angel nevermore,
Sending us her glorious grace,
For the ever lasting race.
Yes that is my own work, hope you enjoy it!
Thats good What is the name? |
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« Reply #14 on: May 31, 2007, 12:23:16 PM » |
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Hmmm, I don't like poetry so much, simply not my stuff.
And I think none of you would understand one of my poems, except you can spek german ;-)
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And then Trogdor smote the Kerrek, and all was laid to burnination.
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« Reply #15 on: May 31, 2007, 12:59:00 PM » |
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Hmmm, I don't like poetry so much, simply not my stuff.
And I think none of you would understand one of my poems, except you can spek german ;-)
Well You dont need to like poetry I made this to show my artistic talent and see if anyone else has any |
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« Reply #16 on: May 31, 2007, 01:29:44 PM » |
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I havent actually thought of a name yet.
Any suggestions.
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« Reply #17 on: May 31, 2007, 01:30:41 PM » |
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I havent actually thought of a name yet.
Any suggestions.
The final legend (I just made a poem named legend) |
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« Reply #18 on: May 31, 2007, 01:32:09 PM » |
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Lets hear it then and good idea, but I dont want it to be close to the name of anyone elses, they might think it as copying the name and not bother reading it
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« Reply #19 on: May 31, 2007, 01:43:07 PM » |
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It is good though doesnt keep in rythm as well as it could.
( sorry to be a critic)
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« Reply #20 on: May 31, 2007, 01:44:21 PM » |
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It is good though doesnt keep in rythm as well as it could.
( sorry to be a critic)
I only wrote it today its not fine printed yet (rough draft) |
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« Reply #21 on: May 31, 2007, 01:44:55 PM » |
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Mine was off the top of my head as well.
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« Reply #22 on: May 31, 2007, 02:00:26 PM » |
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Hmmm, I don't like poetry so much, simply not my stuff.
And I think none of you would understand one of my poems, except you can spek german ;-)
Well You dont need to like poetry I made this to show my artistic talent and see if anyone else has any I don't! |
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« Reply #23 on: May 31, 2007, 03:27:06 PM » |
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« Reply #24 on: May 31, 2007, 03:46:57 PM » |
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Hmmm, I don't like poetry so much, simply not my stuff.
And I think none of you would understand one of my poems, except you can spek german ;-)
Well You dont need to like poetry I made this to show my artistic talent and see if anyone else has any I don't! Ok thep please stop spamming my thread |
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« Reply #25 on: May 31, 2007, 05:38:46 PM » |
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Ok thep please stop spamming my thread
The Irony is killing me, and it's a slow and painful death.
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« Reply #26 on: May 31, 2007, 05:59:04 PM » |
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Woo!!! first full member!!
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« Reply #27 on: May 31, 2007, 07:58:17 PM » |
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Some of us, it must be said,
Post not just to spam a thread.
We swarm the interweb like ghosts,
We read but then we make few posts.
There's nothing wrong with those who lurk,
Distracted as we are from work.
Those who post a large amount,
No one cares 'bout your post count!
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« Reply #28 on: May 31, 2007, 08:25:29 PM » |
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Woo!!! first full member!!
This made my day. Right after the post about spamming and irony. @Charlie-That poem suited this pretty well. Some of you are good at writing these poems, too bad I don't have the talent. Well, if I think of one, I'll try to post it on here. |
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Schools out for summer...(5 weeks)
Schools out forever...(several years)
Schools been blown to pieces...(I wish)
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« Reply #29 on: May 31, 2007, 08:32:59 PM » |
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Some of us, it must be said,
Post not just to spam a thread.
We swarm the interweb like ghosts,
We read but then we make few posts.
There's nothing wrong with those who lurk,
Distracted as we are from work.
Those who post a large amount,
No one cares 'bout your post count!
You cant say that I have never spammed I post full good messages |
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