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« on: November 25, 2007, 03:50:45 PM » |
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Look at my new avatar! He's so cute.
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
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"I'm fed up with this orgasm!"
-Stan, American Dad
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the Scarf
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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2007, 04:32:53 PM » |
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Thats from the art thread, right? *hugs chibi Orangey* He is cute!
EDIT: oops! meant the local flavor thread! (nn )U
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Silfedac
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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2007, 06:58:25 PM » |
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Woohoo! Orangey=tiny beatnik!
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the Scarf
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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2007, 07:00:21 PM » |
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that chibi looks like a little version of this dude I drew around halloween...weird...
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the Scarf
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« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2007, 08:19:41 PM » |
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heh, yeah...actually I'm drawing more of that one dude...His glasses are square, though, and he wears turtlenecks...He's also actually a phantom who feeds off the life force of humans...
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« Reply #6 on: November 26, 2007, 08:50:06 PM » |
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Woohoo! Scarf=drawing emo thingies!
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the Scarf
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« Reply #7 on: November 26, 2007, 08:53:18 PM » |
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Hes not emo at all! Hes a parasite! I'll post pictures when I find it...
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« Reply #8 on: November 26, 2007, 10:07:42 PM » |
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Fine, then. Woohoo! Scarf=drawing emo tapeworm thingies!
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Orangey
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« Reply #9 on: November 26, 2007, 10:08:26 PM » |
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Tapeworms are simultaneously some of the coolest and creepiest things on the planet.
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
-Hysterical Dame, MSPaint Adventures
"I'm fed up with this orgasm!"
-Stan, American Dad
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« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2007, 10:20:52 PM » |
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I agree...however...Phantoms can take on human forms, and if they become attached to their host, they can choose to stop the life flow. However, they cannot choose another host, and will die.
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Silfedac
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« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2007, 10:24:58 PM » |
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Spooky. On another note, are you planning some kind of story?
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« Reply #12 on: November 26, 2007, 10:31:22 PM » |
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er...sort of...I came up with these things, and a story...but I don't have the skills to draw a manga....I have A LOT of info though...
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Orangey
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« Reply #13 on: November 26, 2007, 10:32:15 PM » |
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Then write it; it doesn't have to be illustrated.
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
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"I'm fed up with this orgasm!"
-Stan, American Dad
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« Reply #14 on: November 26, 2007, 10:35:18 PM » |
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Woohoo! Writing=good!
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« Reply #15 on: November 26, 2007, 10:44:35 PM » |
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you obviously haven't seen my fanfiction...or my fiction for that matter...I'm horrible at writing...I'm untalented at writing..I have permanent writers block..
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« Reply #16 on: November 26, 2007, 10:45:33 PM » |
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Use a ghostwriter. You have ideas but can't write, find someone who can write but has no ideas.
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« Reply #17 on: November 26, 2007, 10:49:37 PM » |
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I've been searching...I can't find any....
I'll just write down stuff as it comes to me, then organize it...
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« Reply #18 on: November 26, 2007, 10:59:23 PM » |
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Make your teacher write!
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Orangey
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« Reply #19 on: November 26, 2007, 11:01:20 PM » |
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She certainly doesn't have any-thing else to do.
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
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"I'm fed up with this orgasm!"
-Stan, American Dad
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« Reply #20 on: November 26, 2007, 11:04:50 PM » |
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you know, besides grade the papers of 1000 or so students...
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« Reply #21 on: November 26, 2007, 11:08:31 PM » |
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Then again, forcing your teachers to write disturbing stories for you would look kinda weird.
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« Reply #22 on: November 26, 2007, 11:24:34 PM » |
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The first picture...drawn a bit after halloween.  A page of info about them...sorry if you can't read it.  The latest picture of him taking all of the life force in his host...they would only do this if absosmurfly necessary.  my scanner is horrid... |
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Orangey
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« Reply #23 on: November 26, 2007, 11:59:18 PM » |
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Well, first, on his human form, his tie needs to be longer; also, (and this is mostly a stylistic choice) in real life, hair like that wouldn't really fan out: it'd be more slack and narrow.
I have much better things to say about the phantom form though: you got the proportions just right; they're just far enough from human to be slightly creepy with-out looking cartoony; the tendrils coming off his 'inner' body look good, and aren't too numerous or sparse; I really like the hands. A lot. I can't put my finger on why though. The face looks pretty cool (and reminds me of some-thing form Wind Waker), but you might want to consider using a finer point (even a mechanical pencil) to draw it, so the lines come out crisper. On his legs, don't draw the horizontal curves; just let it fade out. I could take or leave the swirly thing; it looks unbalanced, but I can't think how to fix it.
(PS, she made me do it!)
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« Last Edit: November 27, 2007, 12:01:36 AM by SleepingOrange »
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
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« Reply #24 on: November 27, 2007, 12:17:14 AM » |
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Yay! Advice and critique! Thank you! I will take your suggestions to heart...
Oh, but I'd like to mention that he doesn't wear a tie anymore... I wasn't sure where I was going with the picture, and I added the tie because I didn't know what to do...He wears very stylish turtlenecks now...I have a better standing on his character, and on how he looks. The hair is ridiculous, I agree, but I think I was making it parallel with the true forms arm...dunno why...
I'm really proud of the way the hands turned out on the phantom, especially because one of them looked really wonky for a long time...I fixed it right before I scanned it...
I really need to get a thinner pencil, I would use a mechanical, but I keep losing them and now I can't get another.
When next you see him I hope him to be much improved, and less of the anime style that you seem to hate so much. Despite my nagging, I really am trying to develop my own personal style, and the truth is, I knew I would get an honest critique from you. Sorry for being so annoying.
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« Reply #25 on: November 27, 2007, 12:20:57 AM » |
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I just don't much like critiquing other people's works, because I tend to hit soft spots and make people feel bad. And yes, you're right; I really dis-like anime.
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
-Hysterical Dame, MSPaint Adventures
"I'm fed up with this orgasm!"
-Stan, American Dad
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Silfedac
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« Reply #26 on: November 27, 2007, 01:59:18 PM » |
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That is pretty awesome. I wish I could draw like that...or better...
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Orangey
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« Reply #27 on: November 27, 2007, 05:10:58 PM » |
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I kinda figured this might happen... But why is it ME that's the progenitor of the thread? I thought my new avatar was an appropriate post for the getting to know you thread.
EDIT: And I liked my old name, thank you...
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« Last Edit: November 27, 2007, 05:14:28 PM by Captain Bibliography »
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"Now prop your lazy bones on those getaway sticks and shake a leg, mister! Everyone get in the flivver or this trip's for biscuits, see?"
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"I'm fed up with this orgasm!"
-Stan, American Dad
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« Reply #28 on: November 27, 2007, 05:38:11 PM » |
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Ha! My names are catching on!
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Orangey
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« Reply #29 on: November 27, 2007, 05:55:41 PM » |
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What is WITH all the name-changing? I/we was/were getting on your nerves, you could have just said some-thing.
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